It sounds really good for a video game! I like where it gets all different at 0:55, and the transition back to the melody is great.
It sounds really good for a video game! I like where it gets all different at 0:55, and the transition back to the melody is great.
Thanks! Actually, I think the abrupt modulation to flat II at 0:55 was the reason I originally hated it. I had a very hard time figuring out how to transition back to the original key when I was first writing it. Also, I had extended the triangle wave channel's arpeggios for a few more bars (in a Faxanadu-ish style), which made it so the transition back to the beginning of the loop really didn't work. I actually enjoy it much more now, though, since I've gotten the chance to listen to it again and forget the previous incarnations. Thanks for your feedback!
Sounds pretty good! Reminds of the old Donkey Kong water music.
Hey, thanks! I haven't actually heard the old Donkey Kong water music. I'll have to look it up to see what you mean. :)
You should absolutely submit this to an professional orchestra.
Has the feel of a credits of a videogame. Really nice. Hopw to see more like this one!
Adding an ambient baseline would help. Maybe a couple more tracks too.
This can sound really good if you just tweak it a little.
Incredible! I very much like this song, and the trasitions were done very skillfuly.
What composing program did you use?
Very good. +1 on springtime music.
Just a little annoying thing: the piano at 0:48 is a little tiny bit too loud. Don't want to come out looking like a troll, so just saying.
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Very good, but was a little loud. Introduction was very powerful, but the song is a little slow in getting to the main part. The whole things sound like it is building up to something. Please continue the song.
yeah, I've been meaning to get working on the other part but nothing epic has struck this mind of mine.
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